Its difficult to be objective with your own writing. You tend to give yourself the benefit of the doubt more than you should. Graders, unfortunately, aren't so kind.
To collectively improve, I am going to post some practice essays from readers. If you want yours graded, here are the rules:
1. If you email me an essay, you are giving me permission to post it for the world to read.
2. The essay must be on an MBE subject.
3. Any recommendations are just that, take them or leave them as you please.
I will turn on comments and you people can read and make recommendations for improvement. Hopefully, this is a worthwhile exercise.
If you want your essays featured, essays can be emailed to me at timadvises@gmail.com
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